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UCAS personal statement for Graduate Entry to medicine

UCAS personal statements are used differently by each medical school. Some medical schools use personal statements after looking at pre-entry test results, others include them in their initial short-listing, either way, it is an important part of your application.

Key elements to include:

• Motivation for medicine – what makes medicine right for you?
• Approach to academic learning – what has helped you be successful during your first/previous degree/s?
• Relevant skills – how have you developed these, what do they say about you as a potential clinician? The skills can come from any aspect of your experience – they don’t have to be based on clinically-related experience
• Career aspirations – how does medicine fit with how you see your future?

How to write your personal statement

• Ensure you spend time reflecting on your skills and experiences. Learning from what has gone before and how you have done things is central to both learning on a medicine degree and continuing professional development as a clinician. You may want to ask other people what they feel are your strengths and when they have seen you using these strengths. Feedback from others can be useful to capture things we don’t yet know about ourselves.
• Always use examples from your own experience. If you are saying that you wish to study medicine to provide a service to humankind – explain where this motivation has come from, what other experiences have you had of ‘service’, how did you decide that medicine would be the right sort of ‘service’?
• Check your writing. If a sentence does not include something about your own experience, consider if it is really needed (or whether you can rewrite it to include experience).
• Check your writing for typing errors, spelling, and making sense. Get someone else to proof-read your personal statement for you (the Careers Service does not offer this service, ask a friend or relative who writes well).

The Medical Schools Council has devised skills and attributes of an ideal medical school candidate . You could use this list as a starting point to reflect on what examples highlight these skills for you.

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Tips for writing your Statement of Purpose

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What is a Statement of Purpose?

Your Statement of Purpose explains your motivation for applying for the course. An interesting and well-written statement of purpose showing strong motivation for the course you have chosen can influence the final decision.

Why do we ask for a Statement of Purpose?

The statement of purpose helps us to assess how well you are able to articulate goals, motivations and values, and your writing and reasoning abilities. Tell us who you are, what your academic and professional interests are and how you'll add value to the Master’s course you're applying to.

1. Structure

Have an interesting introduction that acts as a framework for the rest of your statement. Explain what you’re interested in and how you became interested in it, give an overview of your background in this area, your experience, skills and knowledge and conclude with your career aims.

Tell us what will make you stand out as an exceptional candidate for the course.

• Why this Business School? Be specific – don’t make generic statements such as “Because you are an internationally-renowned university with an excellent academic reputation”. If the university/business school itself made a difference in your choice - what was this?
• Why this subject? When did you become interested in this subject and what have you learned about it? It is especially important to demonstrate your commitment if you are applying to a conversion course – why the change of direction?
• What is your academic ability? Highlight any relevant units from your undergraduate degree which will benefit you in your chosen course. You can talk about any relevant work experience, volunteering and extracurricular activities.
• What are your career aims? How will this course help you to achieve them? Knowledge, skills, accreditation with professional bodies etc. If, for example, if you have a particular career or job in mind, talk briefly about this on your application. The same applies if you plan to go on to study for an MPhil or PhD in your chosen subject.

3. Evidence

The statement of purpose will only be convincing if the points are backed up by hard evidence, i.e. examples drawn from academic achievements, work experience and extra-curricular activities. Use a sentence structure where you make a claim and back this claim up with evidence.

This should be concise, it can be over the 300 – 500 words stated on the application form, but make sure it’s not more than one A4 page. Do not upload as a document to your application. You will be able to complete your statement of purpose in the application form. We suggest writing it in a word document and then copying and pasting it into the personal statement section of the application form.

5. Mistakes

Proofread your statement of purpose and check your spelling, punctuation and grammar. Avoid clichéd and overused sentences: 'I have always wanted to study' or 'I feel I have always had a passion for this subject.' Tell us what has influenced you to study this course, be specific. If you are applying for multiple courses or institutions, don’t use the same statement of purpose. It must specific to Alliance MBS and the course you are applying for.

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Contextual admissions

Information on how we consider individual circumstances alongside academic information when reviewing applications.

We believe that talented students should have a fair chance to join the University, regardless of their background. That’s why we have contextual admissions – a process where we review UCAS applications in the context of personal circumstances to better understand a student’s background, achievements and potential to succeed at university. 

How does it work? 

You don't have to apply for contextual admissions– we get all the information we need directly from your UCAS form. 

We look at whether you:  

• live in an area of disadvantage or with low progression into higher education (UK students under the age of 21);
• took your GCSEs/A-level equivalent at a school or college that has performed below the national average over multiple years (UK students under the age of 21); 
• have been in care for more than three months; 
• have refugee status. 

If you’ve faced challenging circumstances or have a disability or medical condition, this would not fall under contextual admissions. However, we’re still here to support you and can provide more information on how to apply and guide you to our  Disability Advisory and Support Service . 

Am I eligible?

Use our eligibility tool to see whether you are eligible for a contextual offer or any additional consideration.

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Our 2025 eligibility tool is expected to launch in August 2024. If you are applying in the 2025 cycle, please wait to check your eligibility until the new tool is available as the data will have changed meaning your outcome may be different.

How you can benefit from contextual admissions 

If you're invited to an interview, we'll take into account that you may have had fewer opportunities to prepare and may not have had access to interview coaching, practice and guidance.

Interviewers will be made aware of this. 

Look at our 'Travel costs to the University campus' section below as we can cover the cost of bus, train or coach travel to our interviews and visit days for certain applicants. 

Personal statement

When reading your personal statement, we’ll consider that you may not have had the same access to extracurricular activities or work experience.

Aspirational offers

If your predicted grades for certain courses are lower than the minimum entry criteria, we may still make you an offer because we understand that predicted grades don’t always accurately show your full potential.  

This is called an aspirational offer, for example, if the entry requirements for your course are ABB, but your predicted grades are BBB,we may still offer you a place with the original offer of ABB. 

Contextual offers

If your predicted grades are within two grades of our minimum entry criteria, you might receive a reduced offer.  

This is only applicable if you qualify for a Widening Participation (WP) Plus or WP Plus PLUS flag , and: 

• Your qualifications and subjects meet our published entry requirements. For example, if a course requires Chemistry and Maths, you must take both subjects. Some courses may also require specific grades in particular subjects. 
• Your course has standard entry requirements of ABB or higher. 
• You complete any additional selection requirements, such as an interview or aptitude test (UCAT if studying Medicine or Dentistry).  

Use our eligibility tool to check your eligibility for 2024.

If you meet our postcode and school performance criteria, the contextual offer is usually one grade lower than the standard entry requirements (WP Plus). Where the standard entry requirements are A*A*A*, a two-grade reduction would be applied. 

If you’ve been in care for more than three months or have refugee status (WP Plus PLUS), the contextual offer is usually two grades lower than the standard entry requirements. Where the standard entry requirements are A*A*A*, a three-grade reduction would be applied.

Please note that contextual offers do not currently apply to T-Level qualifications. 

You can use our course finder to look at the specific entry criteria for each course.

Lower GCSE requirements

Certain courses will offer lower GCSE requirements for WP Plus and WP Plus PLUS applicants. 

This will be clearly stated on the individual course profile for participating courses. 

Results and clearing opportunities

If you’ve received an offer but don’t meet the conditions, we may still be able to offer you a place. We’d also try to identify suitable other courses and offer places where possible. 

Certain courses may also offer lower entry requirements for WP-flagged applicants during clearing.  

Travel costs to the University campus

We understand that the cost of travel to campus can be a barrier to taking part in interviews and visit days.

We’ll offer to pay your bus, train or coach travel to attend any visit which forms part of the assessment process.  

You're eligible for this support if you meet either of the following:  

• receive our WP plus or WP plus PLUS flag (including if you’re care experienced or have refugee status); 
• have successfully completed the Manchester Access Programme .  

If so, you'll receive information about how to request this as part of your invitation to campus. 

If you don't meet the criteria, but you face significant financial barriers in travelling to campus, we encourage you to let your course admissions team know and we'll look at support on a case-by-case basis. 

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Writing your undergraduate personal statement

Our top tips for making the best possible impression.

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What is a personal statement.

Your written personal statement is an important part of your UCAS application. It’s your opportunity to tell a university why you want to study a particular course, show passion for your chosen subject area, and demonstrate your relevant skills and experience.

Research your course options

Make sure that you check the detailed information on our online prospectus about your course choices. This will allow you to properly identify the qualities, skills, and experience you need to study the course. 

It’s very important that you allow yourself plenty of time to research your course and write your personal statement. You may have to write several drafts until you get your statement right.

Length: How much should I write?

You only have 4,000 characters to make your case. You need to structure it well and check that each sentence adds something new. There is also a minimum limit of 1,000 characters.

Getting started

Make a list of what you plan to include - it might help to start by answering the questions below.

• Why you would like to study the course?
• What do you know about the subject?
• What skills and knowledge have you gained from your current studies and other activities that may be relevant to the course?
• What are your plans for the future and career aspirations?
• What academic skills do you have?
• What work experience, placements or voluntary work have you done?
• What are your interests and hobbies?

Once you’ve listed everything, think about what you have learnt from your experiences and how this relates to the course. Select relevant examples to include and organise the information so that you build a strong case for why you should be offered a place.

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I found that by breaking each section down into individual pieces, it felt more approachable rather than writing the entire statement in one go. Once I’d broken it down, I then knitted it back together in a way that felt right with the examples I’d included.

How to structure your personal statement

Introduction.

Why do you want to study your course? Focus the reader’s attention in the opening paragraph - first impressions count.

Main body of application

• Why have you chosen the course you have listed?
• What is it about the subject that you like?
• How are your current studies relevant?
• Include details of any extra reading you have done about the subject.
• Outline your academic skills, for example working to deadlines, doing research and completing reports.
• What knowledge, skills and qualities do you have which are relevant to your course choice?

Work experience

• Do you have any experience relevant to your chosen subject?
• If you do, what skills have you developed and how will they help you to complete the course?
• What skills/personal qualities has your part-time job or voluntary work given you?

Interests and hobbies

• What other activities both in and out of college/school/work do you take part in?
• If you have a hobby or other interest, how has it helped your interpersonal skills or your ability to work in a team?
• If you are applying for deferred entry, explain your plans for your year out.
• Don’t let your personal statement fizzle out. Try to pull together everything that you have covered and finish on a positive note.

Personal statement: Dos and don’ts

• Don't:
• Make sure what you say is appropriate to all of your choices
• Be positive and enthusiastic
• Make sure that your statement flows naturally, try not to overuse ‘I’ at the start of sentences
• Provide examples to illustrate your points
• Have several attempts until you’re happy with it
• Leave plenty of time and keep deadlines in mind
• Get feedback from tutors, family and friends
• Feel that you have to use elaborate language to impress
• Just make a list of the things you’ve done – reflect on what you have learnt from your experiences
• Make simple mistakes - check your spelling and punctuation
• Make things up to make it sound better – the information could form the basis of an interview
• Use anyone else’s work – UCAS put all statements into software that looks for similarities in applications

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These UCAS personal statements have been kindly provided by students applying to The University of Manchester. You can click on one of the links below to view the entire statement and find out if the applicant was offered a place.

You can also view our entire collection of personal statements or view personal statements for application at other universities .

Politics & International Relations Personal Statement Example 1 I have always taken a keen interest in public affairs, always wanting to know what was happening in the world so studying politics and international relations is a natural attraction for me. I have been encouraged to pursue concentrated study due to my incredible fascination with the impact that political decision making has on humanity...

Mechanical/Electrical Engineering Personal Statement Example I have always been fascinated by the vast jobs robots are able to perform, and by the way all these cars around us were designed. The problem is, my interest was not satisfied by revolving around the outer appearance of these machines or by how well they achieved their functions, but was constantly demanding to learn more about how they managed to do so, and what inner complexities I was not allowed to meet closely made it capable of attracting my attention...

Politics and International Relations Personal Statement Example 4 The era in which we live goes through constant turmoil and shifting powers. Not a day goes by without a change somewhere on our planet, which in turn has an effect on yet another change to come elsewhere...

French and Arabic Personal Statement Example In studying French and Arabic, I am eager to compare two mutually influential languages and cultures, particularly their overlapping history and its cultural representations. I decided to defer my entry to retake my Maths A2 and plan to turn this to my advantage by working and living in France, putting what I've already learnt of the French language and culture into practice...

Biomedical Science/Neuroscience Personal Statement Example The limitless potential of the life sciences and the opportunity for world-changing breakthroughs are both exciting and compelling to me. Upon hearing about a disease for the first time, I am eager to find out more about the precise ways in which it affects the body, which has led me to spend much time researching the details of various diseases...

Environmental Science Personal Statement Example 1 I must describe as undetermined the moment from which my compassion began to aim predominantly towards the natural environment and all the elements that compose it. With the passing of the years since my existence here on Earth, I have been able to witness behind the transparent glass of “development”, how our relationship with nature is becoming more noxious; on having assumed us with the right to take a big part of our Earth as if it was completely within our jurisdiction...

Architecture Personal Statement Example 1 I believe that having a visual stimulus in your environment is important. For example, if I'm walking down the street I want to see an eclectic mix of buildings that I find exciting to look at, rather than rows of uniform houses...

English Literature Personal Statement Example 1 When I saw Gatz, John Collin's eight hour interpretation of The Great Gatsby, I noticed that Fitzgerald changes the colour of Daisy's hair every time he describes it. It is "like a dash of blue paint", "yellowy" like her daughters and then "dark, shining"...

Maths and Actuarial Science Personal Statement Example Maths is a subject like no other; its complexity makes it a challenging and often frustrating area of study, however the logic behind every problem leaves a feeling of certainty about it. My devotion to the subject has grown exponentially, especially in recent years...

Physics Personal Statement Example 5 With philosophy at its foundation, and mathematics as its language, physics is full of profound insights into the workings of the universe, from the tiniest quantum interactions to the forming of the most distant galaxies...

Anthropology Personal Statement Example 2 My fascination with human behaviour and the motivations behind human actions has existed for most of my adult life, to determine a cause however I would accredit this to the voluntary work I participated in with Crisis Single Persons Homeless charity...

Chemistry/Chemistry with Biomedicine Personal Statement Example I was told I couldn’t have the opening paragraph I had originally written, so to begin I’ll to describe the scientific processes in my own words as this is what will underlie my degree and hopefully my foreseeable future...

Architecture Personal Statement Example 3 Growing up in post-soviet Belarus I wasn't surrounded by the architectural wonders - all the buildings were dull and grey, therefore from early childhood I started drawing and making houses of my dreams...

Biology Personal Statement Example 8 My interest in Biology started at a very young age due to spending a lot of time outdoors. I am intrigued by the functioning of living organisms and how they are all linked; one small change in one species will affect a whole range of others...

Physics & Astrophysics Personal Statement Example I have always considered Physics to be a captivating area of study, whether it is a question of how aspects of it work, or indeed why they work. As such, I have found deep fascination in studying Physics, as it is able to provide answers (as well as evidence) to such queries...

English Literature & Creative Writing Personal Statement Example 1 'I write for the same reason I breathe- because if I didn't, I would die.' I believe that Isaac Asimov sums up writing particularly aptly. Whilst it could be classed as hyperbole, I feel my sentiments are similar...

Anthropology and Archaeology Personal Statement Example My interest in culture first started when I began to attend my local Hindu Temple with my friend in primary school. I was highly interested in how her surroundings differed from my own and enjoyed immersing myself in her way of life...

Sociology/Social Policy Personal Statement Example Since starting my A-Level in sociology, I've realised it is a subject I can easily grasp and immerse myself in, and that by pursuing courses based around society, social changes and policies at university, I can further understand and appreciate the inner workings of society and how it can be adapted to meet the ever-increasing diversity of the country we live in...

Physiology and Medical Sciences Personal Statement Example The human body is arguably the most complex life form that has ever existed. Studying how the body works helps us to comprehend the many processes that maintain health and find better treatment for diseases...

English Personal Statement Example 23 My love of literature is rooted in the connection it gives us to centuries of ideas, giving us the ability to converse with ghosts, linking us with the greatest and most eloquent minds in history; as Bovee puts it, “books are embalmed minds”...

Civil Engineering Personal Statement Example 9 Civil engineering is a discipline which is essential in the modern world: roads, bridges, airports, railways, sewage works and power stations all provide the fabric of today's society, and without them the world would be a very different place...

Aerospace Engineering Personal Statement Example 12 The time I first saw an aircraft fly over our house, I was three. Out of curiosity I asked my father about it. To avoid complexity he simply explained that it was like a gigantic flying bus. I was awed...

Medicine Personal Statement Example 43 The ever-evolving nature of medical science and the certainty that we will know more about the many different healthcare practices has inspired me to pursue a career in medicine. My dedication to studying medicine has been confirmed by the experience I have gained in different hospitals and practices and I look forward to the academic discipline and challenges that will arise...

Computer Science Personal Statement Example 47 At first, it was all about the interest to know exactly what really brings the voice in to the radio speakers, then as I came across Science in my junior years at school, I started to understand what really is happening in our days, the world of technology...

Geography Personal Statement Example 12 Considering my interests and hobbies, I could have chosen one of any number of subjects as my main area of interest, but there is no other subject which captures my imagination so completely as Geography, and I see links to it in almost every aspect of my life, both within and outside of my studies...

Maths & Actuarial Science Personal Statement Example 1 "It has become a very strange and perhaps frightening subject from the ordinary point of view,but anyone who penetrates into it will find a veritable fairyland"( Kasner E and Newman J).This saying is perhaps the most fitted to describe my enthusiasm for Maths...

Economics and Economic History Personal Statement Example Over the past few years I have developed a strong interest in the Economic history of the UK. I have become interested in how the UK's economic policy over centuries has built the UK into one of the world's most economically developed countries today...

Anthropology Personal Statement Example 5 I realised that I wanted to study Anthropology in 2005 after picking up a book called ''Mapping Human History'' by Steve Olson. I read the book cover to cover a number of times, and knew that I had discovered a subject that I was not only interested in learning but wanted to investigate for myself...

Chemical Engineering Personal Statement Example 8 From the very first day of college I’ve been gradually developing a great interest in all aspects of Chemistry and Maths. Having recently read, “Beyond the Molecular Frontier: Challenges for Chemistry and Chemical Engineering” I have discovered what an imperative role chemists and chemical engineers play in industry and how, by working together, they contribute to an improved future...

Medicine Foundation Year Personal Statement Example 1 Medicine is a combination of care, treatment and research which I am actively interested in. It is a general acknowledgement that good doctors are some of the hardest working and committed people you will meet...

Medicine Personal Statement Example 53 I have asked myself many times what it takes to be a great doctor, but like many questions there is never a straight answer. Keeping an open mind with regards to my career has meant that I have been able to pinpoint the one field which has fascinated me unlike any other, medicine...

History (Ancient and Modern) Personal Statement Example 1 It is those things we don’t yet know or understand that make history a fascinating, intellectual puzzle. We know a remarkable amount about history and the development of society but new archaeological discoveries, the dedicated efforts of historians, translators and other academics and advancements in areas such as archaeometry mean that the body of historical information is still expanding...

Pharmacy Personal Statement Example 6 Having grown up with parents that were both involved in medicine and pharmaceuticals, I developed a deep interest in their work and the effects it had on their patients and customers respectively. Seeing them at work, and witnessing the help they gave to sick people to regain their health or cope with pain, made me decide that I wanted to be part of this fascinating profession...

History Personal Statement Example 35 With such a range of different interpretations for any given era, what fascinates me most about History is the opportunity for debate and analysis. Studying the American Civil Rights Movement, it has been interesting to analyse the motives behind the efforts of Franklin Roosevelt and John F Kennedy to improve the lives of African Americans...

Computer Science Personal Statement Example 49 My views about computing changed considerably when I heard about Linux. In the late nineties it was a newer operating system and tasks like installing and configuring were considered to be quite challenging in India...

Management Studies Personal Statement Example As a witness to the global financial crises, I was struck by the importance and relevance of organisational management. I first applied bookkeeping and devised marketing plans for my mother’s business at the age of twelve...

English Literature with Italian Personal Statement Example As a child, I was always intrigued by the idea that other worlds could be held between the covers of a book, providing insight into cultures, times and societies that would otherwise be foreign to us. Continued study of English Literature through to 'A' level has broadened my understanding and enjoyment of literature, greatly improving my ability to read analytically and critically...

Physics Personal Statement Example 11 The mystery of physics has always enthralled me. Whether it is the complex physical phenomena or simple ideas intertwining to form elegant complex theories capable of explaining near all questions of the universe...

Medicine Personal Statement Example 57 My enthusiasm for the advances of medical science, understanding and technology drive me towards medicine. I yearn to discover further the wonder and complexities of science, and have a greater understanding of the illness' and diseases we face...

English Literature and Sociology Personal Statement Example Since I have begun to study A Level English Literature, it is the way in which writers use expression within their writing to influence and manipulate the reader's emotions which has most intrigued me...

Aerospace Engineering Personal Statement Example 15 Aircraft is one of the major contributions of all time. The intricate engineering behind aircraft, space shuttle and satellite really captivates me. The work of aerospace engineers is quite challenging as they apply their acquired knowledge of Mathematics and Physics to design such major products to satisfy real world necessities...

Architecture Personal Statement Example 16 I vividly remember the moment when I knew I wanted to be an architect. I had been taken to Barcelona to see ‘the wavy buildings’, at the time I didn’t know anything about Gaudí or his work so I was relatively unenthusiastic...

Medicine Personal Statement Example 58 My desire to study medicine grew from a young age when my mother was diagnosed with hypertension. The regular visits to the GP gave me a glimpse into the profession but particularly the thirst to learn more about heart disease...

Neuroscience Personal Statement Example 2 The application of scientific knowledge to understanding how humans, and the creatures around us, function and react with each other has always been a source of wonder to me. The opportunity to combine a scientific understanding of processes and structure of the nervous system and brain with knowledge of applications relevant to our own behaviour, including those of a clinical kind, makes neuroscience such an attractive prospect to me...

Mechanical Engineering Personal Statement Example 16 Being born as a son to two former engineers, I was raised in an environment where curiosity is treasured and nurtured. It wasn't surprising that as I became older, my fascination towards science and technology also grew along with me...

Medicine Personal Statement Example 63 My passionate interest in the sciences has been a major influence upon the choices I have made in terms of my academic studies. From a young age I wanted to understand how and why everything worked. In particular, I became fascinated with the sheer complexity of the human body and the way the different body systems work together seamlessly...

Chemical Engineering Personal Statement Example 10 Chemical engineering is a most fascinating field of all the branches of science and engineering. To me it truly reflects human endeavour and spirit through means such as the exploration of unknown substances, and making something of worth and value out of mere raw materials...

Civil Engineering Personal Statement Example 16 Civil engineering is a profession that is growing and evolving at a fast pace. Civil engineers play a major role in the world meeting the high demand for new buildings and improved infrastructure. I am keen to become a Civil Engineer and I believe I have the talents to be successful in this profession...

Maths Personal Statement Example 12 Mathematics dictates our understanding of the universe; the sciences that the world depends on today are founded and dependant on maths. Scientists and mathematicians spend their lives making remarkable discoveries contributing to the development of humanity, the findings we have been making in fields like quantum mechanics would be completely impossible without maths...

History Personal Statement Example 43 I have always wanted to be part of an open-minded society and live in a country where originality is rewarded, so the UK came to my mind as being the best country to read my degree. My passion for the English language has developed over years of studying English at school, where I have been successful in every written and oral exam...

Computer Science Personal Statement Example 54 Since my first years of school, my life has gravitated around the questions starting with “Why” and “How”. In the 7th grade I was introduced to physics, which answered some of my questions but also generated more...

Mathematics Personal Statement Example 16 I have always had a passion and a thorough understanding of the subject of Mathematics. This helped me to progress academically because, unlike a lot of people, I have not had to worry about passing my GCSE Maths exams...

Spanish and Chinese Personal Statement Example My passion for Modern Foreign Languages is what drives me to pursue a degree in Chinese and Spanish; my fascination and curiosity to explore the cultures of not only China and East Asia, but also of the Hispanic world, motivate me to learn and discover the languages of these regions...

Pharmacy Personal Statement Example 9 I would like to study pharmacy as I wish to play a part in providing medical assistance to the general public, but in also understanding how this process occurs. My enthusiasm in science highly interests me into learning about the production of drugs and their functions on the body...

Law Personal Statement Example 84 The reason I want to study law, is that it has always intrigued me; there’s never been any other option for me it has always been law. I am captivated in the development of the law as it interests me the way the law is changing around the needs of civilisation...

Engineering Personal Statement Example 23 As I triggered the release mechanism and watched two pounds of rock hurtle skywards I thought to myself, "trebuchets are awesome!". Years passed before I realised that this was my first engineering project...

Computer Science Personal Statement Example 56 Computer Science - the most exciting insight into humanity's mission to conquer the future. It has been my favourite and most fascinating preoccupation since childhood, though back then I did not even know it...

Chemistry Personal Statement Example 18 Chemistry explores the properties of all matter and energy in our universe, which eventually leads to breakthroughs that benefit mankind, ranging from how to prevent food from decomposing to understanding what chemicals can help or harm you...

Anthropology Personal Statement Example 7 Coming from a mixed religious background, the comparison between cultural practices has touched me deeply, personally and profoundly. I have been able to observe the influence of culture on people's perspectives and world views...

Geology Personal Statement Example 4 Geology acts as a spyglass into the past, enabling us to understand the ancient environment and how its evolution is a key component to our survival. Through the study of Mineralogy and Palaeontology I have understood the importance of unravelling the earth's structure and mineral composition for both environmental and human benefit...

Electrical and Electronic Engineering Personal Statement Example 3 Curiosity has always been my nature since I was young and I was never afraid to know more as I really like challenges. This is why I have a keen interest in science ever since I started formal education, it explains the hows and whys in almost anything and everything...

Earth Science/Geology Personal Statement Example 1 Everyone wakes up in the morning hoping to achieve something in life. That ‘something’ is what keeps them going every day. For me, it is my strong desire to contribute to society. I believe the best way to do that is by helping them understand the earth’s mechanism and how to maximise its potential to not just complement our lives but to make it better...

Philosophy Personal Statement Example 15 The way philosophy can challenge our assumptions will never cease to astound me. I particularly remember my first lesson on Descartes, where I was asked to prove that I knew the room around me was real...

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Writing your personal statement

Your personal statement is a chance for you to tell us why you want to study your chosen course or subject, and is submitted to UCAS along with the rest of your application. We know writing your personal statement can be a daunting task - so we've put together some handy tips below to help you get started.

You can also hear from our recruitment team for further guidance and tips on writing your statement:

Tips for writing your personal statement

Start to prepare your personal statement early on. Without thinking about a structure, it will be harder for you to collect and organise your thoughts later on. Begin with a mind map and formulate this into a plan to help structure your first draft.

Capture the attention of the reader with a sharp introduction; use positive language to show them you're enthusiastic about your chosen subject. Tell the reader about your skills, and how these contribute to your understanding of the subject.

You've chosen a course and now we want to know why this is the right course for you. What interests you about it? And why do you want to study this subject with us? Showcase your passion and enthusiasm for the degree you're applying for.

Your work experience and interests are also important, as this can highlight why you're the perfect student for the course. Are you part of a club? Do you have an unusual hobby? Entry requirements are transparent, you and your experiences are unique.

Conclude your personal statement by summarising your key strengths, and reiterate that you are ready (both socially and academically) for university life. Be confident, keep it positive, and really sell yourself.

Remember that you don't have an unlimited number of words, so be clear and concise - don't waffle. Don't expect your first draft to be perfect; ask a teacher or careers advisor to check it over for you so that your spelling and grammar are spot on.

Further information

In addition to our top tips, there's tons of information on UCAS  to help support you with your personal statement, from what to include (and the dos and don'ts) to downloadable worksheets and mind maps, so make sure you take advantage of all the resources available to you.